{"id":33687,"date":"2023-04-07T15:47:15","date_gmt":"2023-04-07T19:47:15","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/?p=33687"},"modified":"2023-04-07T15:48:49","modified_gmt":"2023-04-07T19:48:49","slug":"ai-doesnt-get-me","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/2023\/04\/07\/ai-doesnt-get-me\/","title":{"rendered":"AI doesn&#8217;t get me"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Since many of my friends have been amusing themselves asking AI to review their stories, I decided to do the same for a couple of my own stories over at <a href=\"https:\/\/chat.openai.com\/chat\">Chat.OpenAI<\/a>, starting with <a href=\"https:\/\/www.lightspeedmagazine.com\/fiction\/a-man-walks-into-a-bar-or-in-which-more-than-four-decades-after-my-fathers-reluctant-night-of-darts-on-west-54th-street-i-finally-understand-what-needs-to-be-done\/\">my recent Lightspeed Magazine story<\/a> &#8220;A Man Walks Into a Bar: In Which More Than Four Decades After My Father\u2019s Reluctant Night of Darts on West 54th Street I Finally Understand What Needs to Be Done.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Here&#8217;s what the AI had to say &#8212;<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/AIReviewLightspeedStory.png\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/AIReviewLightspeedStory-300x247.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"247\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-33688\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/AIReviewLightspeedStory-300x247.png 300w, https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/AIReviewLightspeedStory-1024x842.png 1024w, https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/AIReviewLightspeedStory-768x632.png 768w, https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/AIReviewLightspeedStory-1536x1263.png 1536w, https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/AIReviewLightspeedStory.png 1588w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Not only is that not really what the story&#8217;s about &#8212; the write-up didn&#8217;t even mention Donald Trump&#8217;s role in it! How could an AI miss <em>that<\/em>?<\/p>\n<p>I also asked it to review <a href=\"https:\/\/apex-magazine.com\/short-fiction\/learning-to-accept-whats-to-come\/\">my recent  Apex Magazine story<\/a> &#8220;Learning to Accept What&#8217;s to Come,&#8221; and it thought my protagonists were an elderly couple named Nora and Jerry dealing with their morality, rather than two robots named BR@X15 and CR81321M wandering a post-apocalyptic future.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/AIReviewApexStory.png\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/AIReviewApexStory-300x244.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"244\" class=\"aligncenter size-medium wp-image-33689\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/AIReviewApexStory-300x244.png 300w, https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/AIReviewApexStory-1024x833.png 1024w, https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/AIReviewApexStory-768x625.png 768w, https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/AIReviewApexStory-1536x1250.png 1536w, https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/04\/AIReviewApexStory.png 1578w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>So that one&#8217;s completely off base. Very strange.<\/p>\n<p>I guess AI isn&#8217;t yet ready for prime time. At least not when it comes to small fish such as me. (And I suppose &#8220;not ready for prime time&#8221; isn&#8217;t an apt metaphor anymore. Does anyone really care about prime time in our time-shifting world?)<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Since many of my friends have been amusing themselves asking AI to review their stories, I decided to do the same for a couple of my own stories over at Chat.OpenAI, starting with my recent Lightspeed Magazine story &#8220;A Man Walks Into a Bar: In Which More Than Four Decades After My Father\u2019s Reluctant Night [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[29],"class_list":["post-33687","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-uncategorized","tag-my-writing"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/33687","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=33687"}],"version-history":[{"count":4,"href":"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/33687\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":33693,"href":"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/33687\/revisions\/33693"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=33687"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=33687"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=33687"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}