{"id":12424,"date":"2008-01-11T09:08:33","date_gmt":"2008-01-11T14:08:33","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/?p=12424"},"modified":"2014-01-11T13:49:41","modified_gmt":"2014-01-11T18:49:41","slug":"the-most-irritating-thing-ive-read-so-far-this-year","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/2008\/01\/11\/the-most-irritating-thing-ive-read-so-far-this-year\/","title":{"rendered":"The most irritating thing I&#8217;ve read so far this year"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"http:\/\/thefix-online.com\/\" target=\"_blank\">The Fix<\/a> has just run <a href=\"https:\/\/web.archive.org\/web\/20080420070412\/http:\/\/thefix-online.com\/reviews\/lcrw-21\/\">a review of <i>the November 2007 issue of Lady Churchill&#8217;s Rosebud Wristlet<\/i><\/a> which contained a sentence that raised my hackles.  (Not a pretty sight.) Reviewer Martin McGrath started off his piece by tackling the very title of the magazine, stating that &#8220;Pretensions to literary stylings would seem to be a certainty, but does the obscure title also hint at a deliberately obscure approach to story and language?&#8221; <\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/01\/LadyChurchills.gif\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.scottedelman.com\/wordpress\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/01\/LadyChurchills.gif\" alt=\"LadyChurchills\" width=\"200\" height=\"246\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-12425\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Personally, I&#8217;ve always felt <i>LCRW<\/i>&#8216;s  title to be whimsical rather than obscure, but no, that wasn&#8217;t what bothered me.  The sentence that irritated me was still to come. McGrath continued by stating:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p><i>There are those writers whose primary purpose is to communicate with their readers, to tell a story, make a point, or engage in a conversation, and there are others who seem primarily concerned with demonstrating the range of their command of the English language and the scope of their intelligence.<\/i><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>My immediate response to this statement was to think&#151;where are these writers who are just trying to show off how smart they are, who care nothing about touching readers?  Because I&#8217;ve never met them.<!--more--><\/p>\n<p><i>All<\/i> writers, whether easy or difficult to comprehend, whether transparent or opaque in their prose, are trying to communicate.  I&#8217;ve yet to meet one of these more complex writers whose personal goals have been to obfuscate deliberately&#151;it&#8217;s just that they feel that the content and themes  they want to communicate can only be shared in a more complex way.  As I think of writers who&#8217;ve at times been labeled difficult&#151;people such as Barry Malzberg, Tom Disch, Samuel R. Delany, John Crowley, Ursula K. Le Guin, Gene Wolfe and on and on and on&#151;none of them have <i>chosen<\/i> to be McGrath&#8217;s latter sort of writer rather than the former.  That&#8217;s just the way they are.  Yes, their audiences might have been larger if they&#8217;d chosen to write in a simpler way (if choice is even an option), but by changing the manner in which they write they&#8217;d also be changing the message. The things they have to say can only be said in the manner in which they  say them.  <\/p>\n<p>Even James Joyce, when writing <i>Finnegans Wake<\/i>, wasn&#8217;t aiming at merely showing off.  He told his tale the way he thought it demanded to be told:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p><i>I can&#8217;t understand some of my critics, like Pound or Miss Weaver, for instance. They say it&#8217;s obscure. They compare it, of course, with Ulysses. But the action of Ulysses was chiefly during the daytime, and the action of my new work takes place chiefly at night. It&#8217;s natural things should not be so clear at night, isn&#8217;t it now?<\/i><\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>I&#8217;ll admit that I&#8217;ve tried to read <i>Finnegans Wake<\/i> many times, and have failed each time.  But that doesn&#8217;t mean that Joyce didn&#8217;t hope that I&#8217;d succeed.  Writers write in many different ways.  But even the most apparently opaque hope to be understood.  They may be understood by fewer, but I truly believe that the hope is always still there.<\/p>\n<p>I think McGrath is misreading motives here.  But at least he writes only that they &#8220;<i>seem<\/i> primarily concerned&#8221; rather than that they &#8220;<i>are<\/i> primarily concerned.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>To McGrath&#8217;s credit, he then goes on to rave about the contents of the issue, which makes the reference to  all those supposedly artsy-fartsy writers more difficult to comprehend.  This straw-man argument takes away from an otherwise insightful review.<\/p>\n<p>If you think I&#8217;m wrong, if there truly are writers out there struggling not to be understood, please point them out to me. Maybe <i>I&#8217;m<\/i> the one who&#8217;s misreading motives.  But I don&#8217;t think so.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>The Fix has just run a review of the November 2007 issue of Lady Churchill&#8217;s Rosebud Wristlet which contained a sentence that raised my hackles. (Not a pretty sight.) 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